Writing to Describe in Huia 1 in Term 2
Huia 1 have been learning to write descriptions based on
observations and research. We have looked at historical, scientific, and
biographic descriptions and decided to have a go at writing one based on our
own observations.
Mrs Vincent:
Mrs Vincent (Intermediatus vincenticus
kayii) is an endangered species of teacher, native to Huia 1, The Gardens
School.
Physical description:
Mrs Vincent tends to wear glasses
and has beady blue eyes that see everything – even at the back of the class.
She has short, greyish faded-blonde hair, and she is nearly always seen wearing
a set of class keys on a black lanyard around her neck. Their jangling is a warning that she is
nearby.
Habitat:
Mrs Vincent is a territorial
creature, found mainly in the Intermediate area of The Gardens School. She
tends to inhabit a corner of the Huia 1 classroom, in a nest of computer cords,
paperwork, books, and pens that don’t work. Also, she can amass in her nest used
whiteboard markers with the lids off, half-full coffee cups, half-empty coffee
cups, excuse notes for sports, and empty A4 plastic sleeves.
Food:
Mrs Vincent is known to eat
healthy food, such as banana sandwiches and home-made soup, but she can also
hoard secret supplies of chocolate or jelly beans for random distribution to
students who have achieved well. She has
been known to consume these supplies herself if there are no eligible
recipients.
Behaviour:
Mrs Vincent can usually be found
teaming up with other Intermediate teachers (Intermediatus friendlyi) to each teach groups of about 25 –
28 students (Intermidiatus fastasticii).
For Huia 1, this usually involves repetitive lessons in the correct tripod grip
of a pen; the correct use of capital letters, commas – including the Oxford
comma – and semicolons; the correct use of I or
me; and the etymology of interesting
words. She has a loud voice that can be heard across her entire territory. Although Mrs Vincent sounds very dangerous,
she can also be a very friendly and helpful teacher.
Conclusion:
It is important that this
creature is not hunted for fashionable clothing or accessories as Huia 1 students
have got used to her and are looking forward to being the recipients of further
jelly beans. This creature is rather fond of them, too.